The Last Meet...
Aman wanted to
show how much he was thankful to nidhi, the smile which was on aman’s face was
only because of her. She came up like the sun after a stormy rainy night. It
was their first meet but seems like they know each other very well from a long
time. They were in touch of each other from last three months but only with Facebook
and WhatsApp. Even being an introvert aman was not hesitating before Nidhi as
in front of other people. Lack of good friends and company made Aman of this
type.
That was the
last day of nidhi, not only in Delhi, even in India. She was leaving India for
life. Aman was unaware of that. They don’t have any plans to meet on the last
day. The behavior of aman on their first meet made nidhi crave for their last
meet.
"R u dere..???"
NIdhi texted him but he did not replied. She sent some more messages but they
were still get unreplied. Finally nidhi called her. But Aman didn’t pick the
call.
“I am in the
nearby mall of your place. Come soon as possible... It’s urgent…” She texted
him.
Aman called her
after 30 minutes of the last message,
'You jerk,' the
first word came out of mouth of nidhi after she picked his call.
'What happened!
I was in class and my phone was on super silent mode. Apologies for that. what’s
the urgency that u want to meet me without any plans?' He inquired.
'I’ll tell u but
first come here,' nidhi said.
'Are you still there?' Aman asked surprisingly.
'Yuppp! and waiting
here from last one and half hour for u,' nidhi replied with bit anger and bit
needy tone.
'Ok! m leaving
my class, will be there in next 20 minutes.'
Aman had no idea
why she wanted to meet him all of a sudden. He didn’t know about that it’s her
last day in India. Aman took the first metro came in even it was so crowded
that aman would never board in it but he don’t want her to be upset.
He reached there
by the expected time. Went inside the mall. He started searching for her but
did not call her. He wanted to see whether she was really waiting for her. He
saw she was sitting in CCD, lonely and ended up 3 cups of coffee till now. He
rushed towards her and grab the seat opposite to her. Her nose was red with
anger but her eyes wet.
'You want to have something?'
Nidhi asked giving him a terrible look.
'NO! First tell
me what the urgency was?'
'Thanks for being here. I don’t know why but I just wanted to meet u. I know it doesn’t make
any sense.'
'Is everything
alright!' aman asked nidhi with caress tone.
'Aman, this is my
last day in India.' she said. Her voice lowered.
'What? And you are
telling me this now! Aman cried with his eyes wide open.
"I don’t wanted to let you think about me. I am leaving forever.'
Aman face hung
down. He wanted to cry but he can’t. He was so expert in controlling his
emotion.
He took her hand
in his. Held tightly and told her to come with him. Nidhi started walking with him without
knowing where they are going. He took a rickshaw and took her to his room.
'Where are
we?' Nidhi inquired.
'First come in,'
He unlocked the door and welcomed.
'Wow! It’s wondrous,
which place it is?' The excitement was clearly seen in her eyes.
'It’s my flat'
Nidhi moved towards the bedroom. When she entered his room there were
all lights turned off. She saw the roof of his room where so much glittering
stars and a big glittered radium moon sticked out. It felt like it was an
another world of aman.
Aman entered his
room and turned on the light but nidhi told him not to do so and keep the
lights off. She took his hand in her and gave him a half smile, the smile was
saying something to him. The urge of her to not let her go, to be with her all
the time and may the time will not pass like sand in hand till they are with
each other. She let him sit beside herself. She was still holding her hand like
a kid who is scared of being alone in throng.
They both were
silent. They were just looking at each other still holding hands, curiously
like they wanted to read all their feelings in eyes. The expectations from each
other was clearly seen in their eyes. With the passing time they were coming
close to each other. The blank space between them was lessening with the
passing time. They were lost in each other eyes.
Some while after
the distance between them was vanished. Aman’s hand was on her face now. Their eyes
closed. The red smoky lips of nidhi met with aman. The kiss was passionate,
intimate and like they were in love. It lasted around 1 minute and nidhi opened
her eyes. She pushed him like he was stranger, took her bag and left the house
without uttering a single word.
The story begins with a few emotions and expression then it explains the context of the same as the subject of matter involves two characters
ReplyDeleteA more romantic end could have been better
Thank you for reading.will try for a better ending next time.
DeleteEnd could have been better......overall the tale truly depics an affectionate respect between the two souls
ReplyDeleteThank you. Hope next time story will be up to your expectation.
DeleteThere are several grammatical errors in the writing......need serious rectification....
ReplyDeleteOver all a nice readable tale..
working on that..
DeleteKeep working ...all the best brother
ReplyDeleteThanks bhaiya
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ReplyDeleteHey keep posting such good and meaningful articles.
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